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写作技巧点拨系列(二)掌握四种并列关系,并列句变得更容易【句式提炼】1.(2013·四川高考)Keepitinmind,andgraduallywecangainthisgoodlearninghabitandbenefitfromit.记住它,我们会逐渐掌握这种好的学习习惯,并从中受益。分析:and为并列连词,连接前后句子,表示同等关系。2.(2013·辽宁高考)Usually,nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.通常,不管我们距离多远或者我们多么忙,我们将会设法回家庆祝。分析:or连接前后句子表示选择,为选择关系的连词。3.(2013·湖南高考)IbegantolearnEnglishveryhard,whichwashardwork,butIenjoyedit.我开始努力学习英语,虽然很辛苦,但我喜欢。分析:but连接前后句子是表示转折意义的并列连词。4.(2013·全国卷Ⅱ)Asweallknow,Chineseknotsmeanreunion,friendliness,warmth,peaceandlove,soIthinktheywillsellwell.正如我们所知,中国结意味着团聚、友好、温暖、和平和爱,所以我想它们会卖得好。分析:so连接前后两个表示因果关系的句子,意思为“所以,结果”,为因果关系的并列连词。【核心点拨】1.并列句定义由并列连词连接的两个或两个以上独立的句子就是并列句。其句式特点为:句子之间用逗号+连词或分号隔开或通过句意来体现。2.并列连词的分类:(1)同等关系:常用and,notonly...butalso...,both...and...,aswellas,then,when(就在这时)等。HeisinClassOneandIaminClassTwo.他在一班,我在二班。(2)选择关系:常用or,otherwise,either...or...,neither...nor等。Eitheryoufollowmyinstructionsoryouleavehere.要么你遵从我的指示,要么你离开这儿。(3)转折关系:常用but,still,yet,while等。ShethoughtIwastalkingaboutherdaughter,while,infact,Iwastalkingaboutmydaughter.她认为我在谈她女儿,可是,事实上我在谈我的女儿。(4)因果关系:常用so,for等。Peterwenttobedearly,forhefeltverytired.彼得早早就睡觉了,因为他感到非常疲乏。3.特别提醒:(1)“祈使句+and/or(otherwise)+简单句”也是并列句的一种,or在此意为“否则”。GivemeonemoreminuteorIwon’tbeabletofinishit.再多给我一分钟,否则我不能完成它。(2)notonly...butalso连接的并列句,当notonly置于句首时,其后的句子通常要用部分倒装的形式。Notonlyhasshebeenlatethreetimes,butalsoshehasdonenowork.她不仅仅迟到了三次,她还没干一点活。(3)并列句有时也可不用并列连词连接,而用分号(;)连接。Thefutureisbright;theroadistortuous.前途是光明的,道路是曲折的。【对点训练】Ⅰ.用适当的连词填空1.Hedoesn’ttalkmuch,___hethinksalot.2.Onemoreweek,____wewillfinishthetask.3.Tomhadaheadache,__hedidn’tgototheparty.4.LiFangisverybusy,___she’salwayshelpingotherswiththeirlessons.5.Let’sturntoUncleWangforhelp,___ourworkcan’tbefinishedontime.butandsobutforⅡ.用适当的并列连词变换句型1.Ifyoudon’tgetupnow,you’llbelateforwork.→_________________________________2.Heisapoet.Heisalsoawriter.→_____________________→_________________________________Getupnow,oryou’llbelateforwork.Heisapoetandwriter.Heisnotonlyapoetbutalsoawriter.3.HeiswatchingTV.I’mreadingthenewspaper.→_____________________________________________4.Shecan’tfinishthetaskontimeandnorcanI.→______________________________________5.Runfast.Youwillbecaughtupwith.→__________________________________HeiswatchingTVwhileI’mreadingthenewspaper.NeithershenorIcanfinishthetaskontime.Runfastoryouwillbecaughtupwith.