短文写作要求:夹叙夹议观点:Patiencegainedfromdoingthesimplethingsmakesabigdifferenceindoingdifficultones,whichiswhereyoursuccessstarts
格式一:段略1:提出观点,要有一个旗帜鲜明的漂亮的过渡句
(2---3句)段略2:叙述一个结构严谨、主题鲜明的个人经历的故事(8---12句)段略3:夯实观点,要有一个漂亮的结论句,最好有一个具有启示指导意义的延伸句
(2---3句)格式二:段略1:叙述一个结构严谨、主题鲜明的个人经历的故事(8---12句)段略2:夯实观点,要有一个漂亮的结论句,最好有一个具有启示指导意义的延伸句
(2---4句)范文一Whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverysimplethingwell
Doingsimplethingsmayhelpusdevelopgoodqualitiesneededinundertakingdifficultandimportanttask,whichlayasolidfoundationforourfuturedevelopment
WhenIwasyoung,Iwasundertheimpressionthatmotheralwaysnagged(不断地唠叨)mehowtodosomehouseworkwell,likemakingbeds,emptyingrubbishorcleaningmyroom,whichIwasalmostfedupwith
Oneday,afterIfinishedwashingdishesinthekitchen,mothercriticizedmeformydoingabadjob,saying