短文写作要求:夹叙夹议观点:Patiencegainedfromdoingthesimplethingsmakesabigdifferenceindoingdifficultones,whichiswhereyoursuccessstarts.格式一:段略1:提出观点,要有一个旗帜鲜明的漂亮的过渡句。(2---3句)段略2:叙述一个结构严谨、主题鲜明的个人经历的故事(8---12句)段略3:夯实观点,要有一个漂亮的结论句,最好有一个具有启示指导意义的延伸句。(2---3句)格式二:段略1:叙述一个结构严谨、主题鲜明的个人经历的故事(8---12句)段略2:夯实观点,要有一个漂亮的结论句,最好有一个具有启示指导意义的延伸句。(2---4句)范文一Whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverysimplethingwell.Doingsimplethingsmayhelpusdevelopgoodqualitiesneededinundertakingdifficultandimportanttask,whichlayasolidfoundationforourfuturedevelopment.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasundertheimpressionthatmotheralwaysnagged(不断地唠叨)mehowtodosomehouseworkwell,likemakingbeds,emptyingrubbishorcleaningmyroom,whichIwasalmostfedupwith.Oneday,afterIfinishedwashingdishesinthekitchen,mothercriticizedmeformydoingabadjob,sayingthatifyoudon’tdosuchasimplethinglikewashingdishesperfectly,itisimpossibleforyoutoundertakeanydifficulttask.AlthoughIfeltverywronged(冤枉,委屈),mylaterliferemindedmemotherwasright.ItwasbydoingsimplethingswellthatIgainedmanyfinequalitiestodosomethingdifficult,ofwhichthemostimportantonewaspatience.Frommyperspective,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervalue(轻看)thepowerofdoingsimplethings.Insteadweshouldregardthemasthesourcesofexperience,skillsandrequirementofsuccess.“Greatachievementonlybelongstothosewhohavethepatiencetodosimplethingsperfectly.”justasFriedrichSchillerusedtosay.范文二WhenIwasyoung,Iwasundertheimpressionthatmotheralwaysnagged(不断地唠叨)mehowtodosomehouseworkwell,whichIwasalmostfedupwith.Oneday,afterIfinishedwashingdishesinthekitchen,mothercriticizedmeformydoingabadjob,sayingthatifyoudon’tdosuchasimplethinglikewashingdishesperfectly,itisimpossibleforyoutoundertakeanydifficulttask.AlthoughIfeltverywronged(冤枉,委屈),mylaterliferemindedmemotherwasright.ItwasbydoingsomethingsimplewellthatIgainedmanyfinequalitiestodosomethingdifficult,ofwhichthemostimportantonewaspatience.Frommyperspective,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervalue(轻看)thepowerofdoingsimplethings.whichisthesourcesofskillsandrequirementofsuccess.