Class9hadagreattimeontheschooltrip.TheywenttoBlueWaterAquariumfortheday.FirsttheyvisitedtheVisitors'Centerandwatchedamovieaboutsharks.Thentheywatchedadolphinshow.Afterthat,theywenttotheOutdoorPoolandsawabigoctopus.Afterlunch,theywenttotheGiftShopandboughtlotsofgifts.Finally,tiredbuthappy,theytookthebusbacktoschool.Attheendoftheday,thescienceteacherwasveryhappybecausetheclassmonitorcleanedthebusafterthetrip.Class9hadagreattimeontheschooltrip.TheywenttoBlueWaterAquariumfortheday.FirsttheyvisitedtheVisitors'Centerandwatchedamovieaboutsharks.Thentheywatchedadolphinshow.Afterthat,theywenttotheOutdoorPoolandsawabigoctopus.Afterlunch,theywenttotheGiftShopandboughtlotsofgifts.Finally,tiredbuthappy,theytookthebusbacktoschool.Attheendoftheday,thescienceteacherwasveryhappybecausetheclassmonitorcleanedthebusafterthetrip.谓语动词：一般过去时Class9hadagreattimeontheschooltrip.TheywenttoBlueWaterAquariumfortheday.FirsttheyvisitedtheVisitors'Centerandwatchedamovieaboutsharks.Thentheywatchedadolphinshow.Afterthat,theywenttotheOutdoorPoolandsawabigoctopus.Afterlunch,theywenttotheGiftShopandboughtlotsofgifts.Finally,tiredbuthappy,theytookthebusbacktoschool.Attheendoftheday,thescienceteacherwasveryhappybecausetheclassmonitorcleanedthebusafterthetrip.层次性强，有过渡型连接词(综述)Class9hadagreattimeontheschooltrip.TheywenttoBlueWaterAquariumfortheday.(正文)(1)FirsttheyvisitedtheVisitors'Centerandwatchedamovieaboutsharks.(2)Thentheywatchedadolphinshow.(3)Afterthat,theywenttotheOutdoorPoolandsawabigoctopus.(4)Afterlunch,theywenttotheGiftShopandboughtlotsofgifts.(5)Finally,tiredbuthappy,theytookthebusbacktoschool.(结尾)Attheendoftheday,thescienceteacherwasveryhappybecausetheclassmonitorcleanedthebusafterthetrip.作文一般框架：文章分3部分：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文：(主要内容)层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。可展开3-5个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。Workingroups:AvisittotheSilverBeach作文一：假如你是李华，上星期五你们班的同学和老师一起到银滩进行野餐活动。请你根据以下的提示用英语写一封80个词左右的电子邮件，告诉你的笔友Tom。天气晴出发时间早上八点候车地点学校门口交通工具校车活动内容野餐、沙滩排球、游泳；和老师一起照相注意：1.电子邮件不得出现真实的校名和人名；2.电子邮件必须包含以上提示各要点，可以适当发挥；3.电子邮件的开头已经给出，请你接着写下去。DearTom,IwenttotheSilverBeach(银滩)forapicnicwithmyclassmateslastFriday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作步骤：AvisittoSilverBeach（1）审：(审题)定体裁：定时态：定人称：记叙文一般过去时（过去式）we写作步骤：AvisittotheSilverBeach天气晴出发时间早上八点候车地点学校门口交通工具校车活动内容野餐、沙滩排球、游泳；和老师一起照相（2）列：①列提纲(即文章结构框架):分几部分，每部分大体内容；②列主要词汇。fineateightinthemorningattheschoolgateschoolbustakephotospicnic,beachvolleyball,swim,写作步骤:AvisittotheSilverBeach1.Itwasfine.2.Wewaitedfortheschoolbusattheschoolgate.3.Wehadapicnic.4.Weplayedbeachvolleyball.5.Weswam.6.Wetookalotofphotoswithourteachers.（3）连：连词成句，连句成文。叙事文常用的过渡型连接词：first;second;third;first;next;then;afterthat;finally;when;while;not…until…and;but;so;or;Howeve...
