山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练:短文改错+写作(58)短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
WhenJoeleftuniversity,hegotagoodjobinabike'sfactory.Andafterhehadworkedthereforsomeyears,hedecidedtohaveachange.Soheputanoticeseveralnewspapers,sayswhatexperiencehehadandthekindofjobhewouldliketohave.Oneoftheanswerhereceivedwasfromamanwhowaslookingforajobeither.Thismanwrotetohim,"Dearsir,whenyougetanewjob,tobekindenoughtogiveyournameandaddresstoyourpresentbossasIhavebeentryingtofindapositionlikeyoursforalongtime."Afterhehadfinishedreadingtheletter,hesuddenlyrealizeswhathehaddonewasrealfoolish
书面表达假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友Jack最近因为被朋友误解而苦恼
请你根据所给提示,给他发一封100词的英语电子邮件对他进行开解
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