山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（15）短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改十处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。LastSundayIsawaworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthreehours.Afterlunch,Iwentintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashot,butallwasquiet.Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewouttheopenwindow.AsIranouttocatchit,bigdropofrainbegantofall.WhenIcomebackintomyhouse,itwasrainingmoreharderandharder.ThenIheardaloudcrashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutofmyroomtofindoutthathadhappened,abigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopofthebackroom.第二节：书面表达（满分25分）______高中生在成长过程中会碰到以下烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。词数：120左右烦恼解决办法相貌、体形不美不必在意不被他人理解，朋友少加强沟通学习滞后，压力大自我鼓励；坚定目标零花钱不多学会节俭用心爱心专心1注意：1．开头已写好不计入总词数。2．语言通顺，结构严谨。3．参考词汇：零花钱pocketmoney压力stressBoysandgirls,____Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains,butwecanridofthemcorrectly______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall．ThankyouLastSundayIsawaworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthreethesuddenlyhours.Afterlunch,Iwentintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashot,butallwasquiet.andThenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewout∧theopenwindow.AsIranouttocatchit,bigdropofofthemdropsrainbegantofall.WhenIcomebackintomyhouse,itwasrainingmoreharderand用心爱心专心2camemuchharder.ThenIheardaloudcrashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutofmyroomtofindoutthathadhappened,abigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopofwhatbrokenthebackroom.Boysandgirls,Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains,butwecanridofthemcorrectlyandwisely．First,someofusareupsetabouttheirbodystylesandlooks．It’sunnecessaryandit’snotimportantatall．Weneedn’tcareaboutit．It’sone’sinnerbeautythatmattes．Second,wesometimesseemtobemisunderstoodbyourteachers,patentsandclassmates．Facingthis,wecanfindapropertimetohaveaheart-to-hearttalkwiththem,tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding．Someofushavefewerfriends．Ithinkbeingopen-mindedandfriendlywilldoyougood．Third,wemayfallbehindothers,whichmakesusfeelstressed．Actuallywecanencourageourselvestoworkefficiently,fullofdetermination．Last,someofusdon’thavemuchpocketmoney,sotheyfeelunhappy．Isn’titstrange?Solongaswehavesome,that’senough．Andwecanlearntosavemoney!That’sall．Thankyou．用心爱心专心3
