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高中生英语写作典型错误例析在长期的英语教学实践中，特别是在指导学生写作和批改他们的习作时，笔者接触到不少学生常犯的错误。这些错误往往具有相当的普遍性，主要表现在词性不明、措词不当、用法不妥、重复累赘、句法混乱、中式英语、拼写与标点有误等。下文通过整理归类，列举正误例句，详加解读诠释，指出错误所在，总结其规律性，以便能帮助学生甄别、改正或避免此类错误的发生，尽快提高其英语书面语言的准确表达能力。一、词性不明1.【误】Everyoneinmyfamilyislikethedog.【正】Everyoneinmyfamilylikesthedog.【解析】作者的原意是：我们全家都喜欢（这只）狗。可错误例句所传递的信息却是：我们全家都像狗！英语中的like主要用作动词（“喜欢”）、名词（“爱好”）形容词和介词（“像”）。弄清“like众兄弟”(like,unlike,dislike,likely,alike,looklike,wouldlike,feellike)的词性和搭配很有必要，以便做到触类旁通。2.【误】Ourschoollibraryisopenedfrom9amto7pmfromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.【正】Ourschoollibraryisopenfrom9amto7pmfromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.【解析】open既可用作动词、名词，还可以用作形容词。3.【误】Thosewhostronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosetheirfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.【正】Thosewhoarestronglyagainsttheideathinkanimalswilllosetheirfreedomandnatureifcagedinthezoo.【解析】误将介词作动词:against(“反对”)在英文中是介词而不是动词，用介词表达动作意义，要加助动词be;for为其反义词，意为“同意”。4.【误】Withmoreandmorecarscomeintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.【正】Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.【正】Asmoreandmorecarscomeintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.【解析】误把介词当连词：①“随着”with---as；②“像......一样”like---as；③“当”during---when；④“因为”becauseof---because；⑤“尽管”inspiteof/despite---though；⑥“为了”inorderto---inorderthat。前者为（短语）介词，后跟名词或名词性短语，后者是从属连词，接状语从句。5.【误】Inmyopinion,cheatinginexaminationsisunfairforthoseworkhardstudents.【正】Inmyopinion,cheatinginexaminationsisunfairforthosehard-workingstudents.【解析】hardwork(adj.+n.名词短语),workhard(v.+adv.动词短语),hard-working(adj.合成形容词)。词性容易搞混的还有good/well,health/healthy,relax/relaxed,thank/thanks/thankful,pass/passed/past等。二、措词不当1.【误】NotuntilIgotbacktothehoteldidIrealizeIhadforgottenmyluggageinthetaxi.【正】NotuntilIgotbacktothehoteldidIrealizeIhadleftmyluggageinthetaxi.【解析】表示把某物“遗忘，落下”，句中有地点状语时要用leave。2.【误】Underthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers,ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.【正】Withthehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers,ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.【正】Thankstothehelpofmyclassmatesandteachers,ImanagedtomakeupforthelessonsIhadmissed.【解析】思维方式差异：“在......的帮助下”实则是“由于......的帮助”，under常用于undertheleadership/protectionof...。3.【误】Inthiswaywecanavoidsufferingfromthepowerofexams.【正】Inthiswaywecanavoidsufferingfromthepressureofexams.【解析】同义近义词混淆:power（“能力，权力，电源”）；pressure/stress（外界的“压力”）；strength（内在的“力量，劲”）。此类名词还有question（问题）与problem（难题）；advice（忠告）与suggestion（建议）；company（公司）与factory（工厂）；people（一些人）与person（个别人）。4.【误】Allmyfamilywelcomeyousomuch.【正】Myfamilyexpectyourarrivalsomuch.【正】Everymemberofmyfamilyexpectsyourarrival.【正】MyparentsandIaremorethanpleasedtohaveyouwithus....