本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述名人的的文章思源高中陈艳写作课Howtodescribeaperson?•Looking外貌：•Dressing穿着:•Character性格:•Hobby爱好:3.Writesomethingaboutthisboy.(3-5句话)提示词：blackhair,sparklingbrowneyes，friendlysmile，darksuitandtie，intelligent（聪明的）,confident（自信的）Hehasshortblackhair,sparklingbrowneyesandabroadfriendlysmile.Heiswearingadarksuitandtie.Helookslikeanintelligent,confidentman.55..写作步骤写作步骤1)1)审题审题2)2)列纲列纲3)3)连句连句4)4)修饰句子修饰句子组织文章组织文章5)5)检查纠错检查纠错（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（适当运用承上启下的过渡词（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,,使文章更完整更精炼）使文章更完整更精炼）（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）及标点符号）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）Howtotellastoryaboutafamousperson1•.人物简介的写作步骤•1).Birthdayandbirthplace•2).Familybackground•3).Education•4).Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)•5).Evaluation1.Birthdayandbirthplace2.Familybackground•人物简介写作中常用的词组及句子•1.Birthdayandbirthplace—was/werebornon…in…•2.Familybackground——•1)apoor/richfamily•2)his(her)familywassopoorthat……，•3)withthehelpofhisparents,•4)hisfatherwasverystrictwithhim……,•5)thesonofapoorfamily,•6)whenhewasasmallboy,•7)asachild,•8)duringhis(her)childhood,•9)spendhischildhoodin……,•10)liveahappy(hard)life,3.Education•1)graduatefrom……departmentof……university,•2)Whenatcollege,hemajoredin……,•3)receiveadoctor’sdegree•4)gethighereducation•5)goabroadforfurtherstudies4.Bigeventsinhislife•1)beinterestedin…,2)workhardat…,•3)devotehislifetimeto…,5)makeabigdecision.makeupone’smindtodosth.•6)dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance•7)befondof…,8)bestrictinsth.•10)tryone’sbesttodosth.11)encouragesbtodosth..13)winaprizein…competition.14)begoodat.15)makerapidprogressin…,16)setanewworldrecordof…17)becomeamemberof…18)studyhard.trainhard..20)worksohardastoimprove…5.Evaluation•1)oneofthebest(mostimportant)…•2)setsbagoodexample•3)berespectedbyeveryone•4)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccess•5)remembersbforever•6)befamousas…•7)Peoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.•请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.•出生:1923年5月,香港.•经历:•1,7岁丧父,家境贫困;•2,1955年后,经营建筑(architecture),航运,石油等,成为国内外知名人士;•3,改革开放(thereformandopenpolicy)以来,先后捐资支持教育,文化,体育,和福利事业款项达100多亿港元.•影响:成为"感动中国"的人物(MovingChinahero).Tips（提示）•①wasborninAttheageof.wase②③ngagedin（从事....，忙于....）,architecture（建筑）,shipping（航运）,petroleum（石油）,homeandabroad（国内外）④thereformandopenpolicy（改革开放政策）,donated....to....（捐赠，赠送）sponsor（支持）publicwelfare（公共福利）⑤madegreatcontributionsto（对...作出了重大贡献）,aMovingChinahero（感动中国人物）•correctyourpapertogether(groupwork)8.Let’ssharesomecompositions.•范文：①InMay1923,DrHuoYingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.Attheage②often,hisfatherdied.After1955,hewasenga③gedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.Sinc④ethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstr⑤uctingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero.10.Writeyourcompositionsagainafterthecorrections.Later,handinyourcompositionstome.
