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第三周书面表达Nevergiveuplearning.书面表达假设你是英语报纸Teens的编辑Collins，读者李华写信告诉你他对高中学校生活的压力和父母整天的唠叨感到很厌烦，打算辍学外出打工，到社会闯荡一下。请你用英语写一份信劝说他放弃这个念头并给出自己的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。结构：Para1.（承接开头）简单评价Para2.（针对李华的状况）劝说和建议Para3.结束语(2-3句)Para1.（承接开头）简单评价对（某个观点）表示反对1.Idon‘tthinkitagoodideatodosth2.Ithinkitisunwise（不明智）/unreasonable（不合理）/dangerous/harmfultodosthPara2.（针对李华的状况）劝说和建议(1)针对学习压力（某事）是很常见的1.It'snormalforsbtodoIt'scommonthat+从句Asisoftenthecase,solution：1.easeyourstresswiththehelpofvariousactivities借助各种活动环节压力2.relaxyourselfbydoingsth3.It‘sagoodideatoreduce/releaseyourpressurebydoingsth“父母这么做是有原因”：1.Asanoldsayinggoes,"Lovewell,whipwell."俗话说“爱之深，责之切”。2.Thereasonwhytheydosthisthat...3.Theydosthforyourowngoodsolution：1.communicatewithyourparentstoearntheunderstandingfromyourparants和家长沟通，获得父母理解2.youshouldtalkwithyourparentsinsteadofcomplainingthem.你应该和家长交谈，而不是抱怨他们（3）针对辍学工作“值得注意的是”的表达1.Youshouldlearnthat+从句2.Youshouldbeawarethat+从句3.Itisnoticedthat+从句4.Whatshoulddrawyourattentionisthat+从句评价：1.Youaretooyoungtodosth2.It‘sapitythatyoudropoutfromtheschoolatayoungage.小小年纪就辍学是很可惜的。3.Soonerorlateryouwillberegretfulfordroppingoutsoearly.迟早你会为提早辍学感到后悔。4.Onlyifyouareequippedwithrichknowledgecanyoubecapableoffindinganidealjobinthefuture.只有先读好书，将来才能找到好的工作。•回信人称I,you,we•Yourssincerely,•希望（某人）做某事hopetodo,hopethatsb.doessth.expect/wishsb.todo,~that…•beconcerned/worriedabout,worryabout•forlackofknowledge•stress,feelstressedDetailsdecideeverything!观点明确，（连接）逻辑自然Ithinkit’snotagoodideaforyoutogiveupyourstudyandmakealivingawayfromhome.Itisaverycommonphenomenonthateverystudentistiredofstudyingandfeelsstressedatthemiddleschoollife…Asweknow,knowledgecanchangeone’slife,asasayinggoes,“AllroadsleadtoRome,”theonlythingtodonowistostudywell,whichcouldprepareyouforasatisfactoryjobinthefuture.Therefore,youshouldletyourselfcalmdowntothinkagain.(xiaoping,4)…Nowadays,moreandmorestudentsprefermakingalivingawayfromhometostudyingatschool.Ithinkit’sbadforstudents.Herecomemysuggestionsonit.Asahighschoolstudent,youshouldrealizeyourowndutytodayistolearnmoreandmoreknowledgeandstudyharderandharder.Inaddition,...What’smore,asfarasI’mconcerned,thereisnodoubtthatlearningtoconsideryourparentsisalsobeneficialtoyou,inwhichyoucanknowyourparentsloveyousomuch.Lastbutnotleast,it’susefultotellyourparentsyourfeelingsandideaandaskthemforsomehelp.(yuye,4)1.承接开头，表同情心•Icanunderstandthepressureofthehighschoolstudywhichmakesustiredsothatweareeagertosleepeveryday.Butthisiswhatwemustdoandeveryonehastoexperienceinordertobeadmittedtoagooduniversity.It’seasiertogetagoodjobifyougraduatefromagooduniversity.(yuesi,5)1.承接开头，表明观点•Itisnotagoodideaandit’sdangerousforyoutomakealivingawayfromhome.Asahighschoolstudent,it’snormalthatmanystudentshavemuchstressandfeelverybored…What’smore,…Therefore,nowthemostimportantthingistostudyhardandtograduatefromagooduniversityinthefuture.(daiwei,5)•Iknowyouarestre...