10月首考书面表达评析◆题型解读和以往的高考英语命题作文不同,读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息,不仅能读懂字面含义,还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时,考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上,考生顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用英语表达出来。同时,在组织语言时,切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。◆故事主线已知线索:吵架——出走——迷路——失联——自救——思念——寻路——直升机——飞离……拂晓……可续写线索:失望?坚信?曲折?直升机?Tom?自救?获救?◆续写词汇已给提示词汇:Jane,Tom,lake,walk,climb,atadistance,tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblouse话题激活词汇:环境:forest,stream,rock,berry,valley,steep,cave,lake,waterfall(人口、环境与自然)困难:hunger,starve,thirsty,injure,broken,blood,panic,shelter,survive(survival),suffer,cold,severe(天气与自然灾害)活动:walk,climb,fall,crawl,taste,attempt,struggletoone’sfeet,makeone’swayto,pickup(人体与动作)情绪:toone’sgreatjoy,breakdown救援:rescueteam,doctor,searchfor,spot(天气与自然灾害)意志品质:calm,courage,will(性格与行为特征)评价:amazing,makeitPossibleversions:1.Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Althoughshefeltalittlesad,shedidn’tgetfearful.ShethoughtaboutTom.“Hemusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawahugeflatrockinanopenareaatadistance.Sherushedtotherock,climbedontoitandwaited.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoresheflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Shebrokedownandburstintotears.(续写词数:154)2.Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janetriedtofindshelterfromthenightcold.Butunfortunately,sheslippedoverandbrokeherleg.Withtheextremepain,Janemanagedtomakeherwaytoarockforshelter.Undertherock,Janestayedwideawake,knowingshemightnotbeabletogettothelakewithabrokenleg.“Don’tbeafraid.Tommustbesearchingforme.Andthehelicopterwillcomebacktomorrow,”shethoughttoherself.Afterquiteawhile,Janefellasleep.Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shestruggledtoherfeetandheadedforthestream.Afterhavingsomeberriesandstreamwater,Janewalkedslowlytoanopenareatowaitforherrescue.Tohergreatjoy,shesoonheardthehelicopter.Janemadlywavedheryellowblousewhenitcameintosight.Sadly,thehelicopterfliedawayagain.However,sooncametherescueteam,togetherwithTom,whohadfoundJane’slocationfromthehelicopter.Janewassaved.(续写词数:163)附:2016浙江书面表达应用文分析第一节应用文写作1.真题回顾假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchangestudent)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍自己;2.告知到达时间;3.询问应做何准备。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.参考范文DearLynn,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.I’mhappytoknowthatI’llbestayingwithyourfamilyinthenextfewmonthswhileI’mstudyingatthelocalhighschool.Thankyouforhavingme!IwillarriveinTorontoonAugust20thandgettoyourplacelatethatafternoon.IwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesothatIcangetmyselfbetterpreparedformystayinCanada.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes,LiHua