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体裁作文之投诉申诉1.开头：交代投诉信内容，表明写作目的。我写信是为了投诉我在你网站上购买的鞋子。Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintabout/complainaboutthepairofshoesIboughtfromyourwebsite.IamwritingtoinformyouthatIamnotsatisfiedwiththeshoesboughtfromyourwebsite.IamwritingtoshowmydisappointmentabouttheshoesIboughtfromyourwebsite.2.投诉内容Iwastoldthat…/Itwaspromisedthat…/Itwasclaimed(声称）that…3.要求我要求要么马上寄给我一双新的黑鞋子，要么全额退款。Fortheabovereasons,Idemandthateitheranewpairofblacksize-nineshoesbepostedtomeimmediatelyorIshouldbegivenafullrefund.4.询问如果我寄回弄错的鞋子，你们公司会不会支付邮费？Furthermore,ifIsendbackthewrongshoes,willyourcompanypayforthepostage?5.句子适当增加toone’sdisappointment,unluckily,worsestill,tomakemattersworse…等投诉信感情色彩的词或短语。我所订的是一双黑色九号的鞋子，但我收到的是白色的8号鞋子。WhatIorderedwasapairofblacksize-ninthshoesbuttomydisappointment,Ireceivedapairofwhite,size-8shoesinstead.更糟的是，交鞋的日子推迟了10天，本应该在4月10日收到的。Worsestill,therewasaten-daydelayindeliveringmyshoes,whichshouldhavebeenreceivedonApril10.你在某餐厅吃饭，不满意餐厅服务员的态度。请向该餐厅写一封投诉信，内容包括：写信目的：投诉名叫李华的服务员的服务态度不好。具体表现：(1)提前订了位，但他却忘记留座位，导致等了半小时；(2)某些菜式涨价，顾客吃后才知道；(3)点菜时，不能耐心回答顾客问题；(4)粗心大意，弄错账单。投诉要求：该服务员应意识到错误；得到惩罚；变成更专业。IamwritingtocomplainabouttheserviceoftheclerkcalledLiHuaofyourrestaurant.Firstofall,Ididmakereservationsforatablebutheforgotaboutit,causingustowaitforhalfanhour.Moreover,IwasnottoldthatthepricesofsomeofthedisheshadincreaseduntilIfinishedmymeal.What’sworse,heansweredmyquestionswithoutpatiencewhenIordereddishesandheevenmadeamistakeinaddingupmybillbecauseofhiscarelessness.Therefore,Idemandedthatheshouldrealizehismistakesandgetpunishmenttobecomemoreprofessional.DearSir,Iamwritingtocomplainaboutthetwo-daytriptoShenzhenorganizedbyyourtravelagency.ItwaspromisedinyouradvertisementthataprofessionaltourguidefromShenzhenwouldlead30touristsasateam,butactually,thetourguideevendidnotknowtheexactrouteandtherewere40peopleinourteam.Besides,itwasclaimedthatwewouldvisitfivefamousattractions,whileinfactweonlyvisited3.Worsestill,wenotonlyhavetopayforourmealsexceptlunch,butalsofourpeoplewerearrangedtosharearoominapoorlyequippedhotel,whichwastotallydifferentfromyourpromisethattwotouristswouldsharearoominafour-starhotelandmealswerefree.Pleasegive50%ofmymoneyback,orIshallbeforcedtotakethematterfurther.