第一步过篇章关董玉青制作第一讲如何写“建议信”建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。建议信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议，具体写作结构如下：[积累靓点词句]1．开头部分常用语(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我写信是要表达有关……我的看法。(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽量提出一些有用的建议。2．中间部分常用语(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议……(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...你最好……/最好是……(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...在我看来……(5)Foronething...;foranother...一方面……，另一方面……(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...如果我是你，我会……(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...我认为你可以……3．结尾部分常用语(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议。(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。[仿用结构模板]Dear________(对象)，I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto________(引出对方需要建议的主题)．Hereareafewsuggestions(表述建议内容).First,itisimportantto________.Then,italsohelpsto__________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso__________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)Asto________，Isuggest________(具体到某一方面的建议).Inaddition,_______(其他的建议).I’msure_______(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)．Ihope________(表达愿望)．Yourssincerely，LiHua必背英语建议信写作模板英语建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议及忠告。一般采用“三段式”。第一段：简单介绍自己，表明写作意图。第2段：分项提出具体的建议和忠告；第2段：对提出的建议进行总结或礼貌问候。DearSmith，IamLiHua,asenior3student(ChairmanofStudents’Union).Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou(如果是回信).④Hearingthatyouarehavingdifficulties/atalossonhowtocopewiththepressureoflearning.Thesuggestionsareasfollows.【写作意图】Iamconvincedthatthefollowingsuggestionsaresurelyofbenefittoyou.①Tobeginwith/Firstofall,themostbeneficialandaccessiblewaytorelievestressisthroughplayingsportsuchasplayingbasketballandrunning.Notonlydoesexerciseimproveyourhealthbutalsomakesyoucheerfulandraisesyourlearningefficiency.②Whatsmore/Besides/Moreover,listeningtosomesoftmusicdoesrelaxyourmoodandeasilygiveyouanewstart.③Lastbutnotleast(最后但同样重要），asanoldsayinggoes,lifeisnotalwaysfullofsmilesandflowers.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmind(保持乐观心态)willcontributeto（有助于）agoodphysicalstate.【具体建议】Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.【总结】[经典范文练背](先补写后背诵)DearPeter，I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon①(怎样学好汉语)．Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto②(学习一门中文课程)asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.ThenitalsohelpstowatchTV,andreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesehowtolearnChinesewelltakeaChinesecoursesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Youcanalso③(结交更多的中国朋友).TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.IhopeyouwillhaveagoodcommandofChinese.Yourssincerely，LiHuamakemoreChinesefriends制作教师:董玉青
