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Winterwilleventuallypass,andspringissuretocome.Introduction:书面表达---读后续写提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。续写部分为2段。（满分25分）短文内容和情节词汇和语句1.词数:3502.体裁：记叙文或夹叙夹议为主3.故事逻辑性强，有情节，有起伏Introduction:测试要求和特点1.有自由空间2.合乎情理和逻辑--有效续写1.每段段首句已给2.字数：150±20words半限定写作---“戴着镣铐跳舞”第五档（21-25分）（1）与所给短文融合度高，与所提供的段落开头语衔接合理。（2）内容丰富。（3）所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确。（4）有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。Introduction:阅卷评分标准阅卷时考虑以下几个方面：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用程度;(3)应用语法结构结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯。相关性：情节与原文的相关性--情节一定要回照原文；开放性：续写的特性--构思在逻辑上一定要合理，--多种可能性择其优而续写所续部分：高立意、正能量、传递积极的情感态度原文与后续的融洽度；后续两段间的融洽度；段落开头语与后续语的融洽度。逻辑权重高于内容、语言和情感；前后逻辑要一致，内容不偏离主旨；逻辑靠内容支撑，内容靠语言表达；Introduction:融洽度高，衔接合理五个一致：1.要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。2.要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致。3.要与原文在人称，主体时态上保持一致。4.要与人物的思想行为、性格特点保持一致。5.要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。Introduction:与原文的融合度Introduction:解题思路搞清原文剧情回扣原文，结合段首句确定剧情走向融入关键词，想象细节拟写草稿丰富细节，润色阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardthelongloudnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(抢劫)!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?”hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI’mthebankthief!”Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”_______________________________________...