九年级（上）Unit2第二部分高频话题写作指导保护环境写作导图从全国近五年环境保护相关话题书面表达的命题来看，写作角度如下：1.记叙一次环保活动。如：2014邵阳志愿者活动，2013襄阳介绍环保活动；2.保护环境的措施。如：2014龙东保护水资源，2014贺州节约。VoluntaryactivityPlace:trainstationCleanthebenchesPerson:classmatesTime:lastweekPickuptherubbishSweepthegroundTiredbuthappyHopetoimproveourenvironmentActivitiesFeelings写作范文详见：http://www.wanweiedu.com亮点句型速成常用句型：Everyoneshouldprotecttheenvironment.Andtheworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.推荐句型：Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.常用句型：Weshouldplantmanytrees,andwecanlivebetterandhealthier.①Wearesupposedtoplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.推荐句型：②Ifweplantmoreandmoretrees,wewilllivebetterandhealthierinthefuture.1.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground.2.It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.3.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment.4.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.5.Wearesupposedtoplantmoreflowersandtrees.6.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.7.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.8.It’severyone’sdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.9.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.10.It’snecessarytosavewater.11.Recyclingtrashisalsoimportant.典例剖析（2014邵阳）假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。Place:Trainstation;Time:From8:00to12:00onSaturdaymorning;People:Youandsomeclassmates;Activities:Cleanthebenches,pickuptherubbish,sweeptheground;Feeling:Alittletiredbuthappy.细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动的事情（包括时间、地点、人物、活动、感受）。2.本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。3.回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。做到语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于80词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。【审题指导】Bob,①I’mwritingtotellyouaboutavoluntaryactivitylastweek.Myclassmates②andIdecidedtodosomethingtomakeitcleanerandtidier.①开门见山地引出事件；②动词的复合宾语结构，makesth.adj.，makeitcleanerandtidier“使……更清洁、更整洁”，增加了文章的可读性；【范文点评】③First,wecleanedthebenches,andthenwepickeduptherubbishandadvisedothersnottothrowrubbishhereandthere.Atnoon,wesweptthegroundtogetherandthenweleft.③固定词组cleanedthebenches，pickeduptherubbish等的运用彰显小作者词汇之丰富，也是增分的亮点；④Wewerealittletiredafterlonghoursofhardwork,butwewerestillveryhappy.Ihopeeveryonewill⑤makeacontributiontoimprovingtheenvironmentofourcity.Hopetowritesoon.Bestwishes!Yours,WangLei④点明主题并升华，alittletiredbuthappy“有点累但是很高兴”；⑤makeacontribu-tion“为……做出贡献”。彰显了小作者词语运用的娴熟，也给文章增色不少。
