山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（17）短文改错WhenJoeleftuniversity,hegotagoodworkinabikefactory.1.____Butafterhehadbeenworkedthereforsomeyears,hedecided2._____tohavechange,soheputanoticeinseveralnewspapers,3._____sayingwhatexperienceshehadandthekindofjobhewould4._____liketohave.Oneoftheanswersheacceptedwasfromaman5._______waslookingforajob,too.Thismanwrotetohim,“Dear,sir,6._______whenyougetanewjob,bekindenoughtogiveyournameand7.___addresstoyourpresentbossasIhavebeentryingtofind8._________apositionlikeyoursforalongtime.”Afterhereadstheletter,9.________hesuddenlyrealizedthatwhathehaddonewasrealfoolish.10.________书面表达假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。几年前满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾用心爱心专心1现在街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.参考词汇：摊点：stalls历史文物historicalrelics1.work改成job2.去掉been3.change前加a4.experiences改成experience5.accepted改成received6.去掉was或was前加who7.your改成my8.正确9.reads改成read10.real改成reallyOurcityhaschangedgreatlyoverthelastfewyears.Streetsusedtobenarrow,witholdbuildingsandstallscrowdedtogether,andlittereverywhere.Nowadaysthestreetsarewider,cleanerandtherearetreesandflowersgrowingalongthesidewalks.However,increatingamoremoderncitysometraditionhasbeenlost.Someofthehistoricalbuildingshavebeentorndownandhighrisebuildingsandparkshavebeenbuiltintheirplace.Theancientculturehasdisappeared,andourcityhasbecomethesameasallothercities:modern,cleanbutwithoutitsownspecialcharacter.Areallchangesgoodchanges?Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtoprotectourhistoricalrelicsatthesametime.用心爱心专心2
