山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（4）短文改错假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。John,alittleboylivingnextdoortome,likedfastfoodverymuch.Hisparentswassobusythattheyhadalittletimetocookforhimathome.Sotheyoftentookhimeatfastfood.That’sbecauseJohnbecameoverweight.Mymotherhadalwaystoldhisparentsthattoomuchfastfoodwasharmful,andtheyignoredmymother’sadvices.Recently,thedoctorwarnedhimnevertoeatfastfoodanymoreafterthepoorboyhasaphysicalexamination.Herparentscametorealizewhataterriblymistaketheyhadmade.NowJohn’smotheroftencomestoaskmymotherforadviceinhowtomakehealthyfood.书面表达假设你是某外国语学校的高三学生李华，前两天你在报纸上读到重庆女生张姣以满分成绩考入耶鲁大学的报道，心情十分激动。请用英语给她写一封信，主要内容如下：1.表示祝贺；用心爱心专心12.请教学习方法；3.询问未来计划。注意：1.词数100~120；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。提示词语：耶鲁大学YaleUniversityZhaoJiao,IamLiHua,asenior3studentfromaninternationalforeignlanguagemiddleschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes！Yours,LiHua改错：John,alittleboylivingnextdoortome,likedfastfoodverymuch.Hisparentswassowerebusythattheyhadalittletimetocookforhimathome.Sotheyoftentookhim∧eatfastfood.去掉to用心爱心专心2That’sbecauseJohnbecameoverweight.Mymotherhadalwaystoldhisparentsthattoomuchfastwhyfoodwasharmful,andtheyignoredmymother’sadvices.Recently,thedoctorwarnedhimneverbutadvicetoeatfastfoodanymoreafterthepoorboyhasaphysicalexamination.HerparentscametorealizehadHiswhataterriblymistaketheyhadmade.NowJohn’smotheroftencomestoasktomyterriblemotherforadviceinhowtomakehealthyfood.on或about作文ZhangJiao,IamLiHua,asenior3studentfromaninternationalforeignlanguagemiddleschool.IhappenedtoreadtheexcitingnewsthatyouwereadmittedtoYaleUniversitywithafullmark.Firstly,congratulations!Yoursuccessreallyencouragesmeandgivesmethepowertorealizemyowndream.Secondly,wouldyougivemesomesuggestionsonhowtostudyefficiently?ThesedaysIhavebeenworkinghardfortheNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationbuttheresultseemsunsatisfying.Andlastly,Iwanttoaskyouaboutyourfutureplan,forIfindthatmydreamforthefuturekeepschanging,soIamatalossnow.I’msureyourideawillbeofgreathelptome.用心爱心专心3Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua用心爱心专心4
