山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（60）短文改错Ifsomeoneasksyouhowyoucanmakeyoualways1.happy,youwillperhapsfindratherdifficulttogivehim2.theproperanswer.Doyouremembertheoldsaying“No3.humanbeingcanreallybehappywhoisnotgivingortrying4.togivehappinesstoothers?”Ifyouwillalwaysthinkof5.takingmorefromothersandgivethemless,youwon’tbe6.abletohavehappinessinyourlifeevenyouareveryrich.7.Hereisanarticleforyou.Ifeachofyoufollowit,8.yourunhappydaywillcometoanend.Soyoushould9.learntogiveupyourowninterestswhennecessarily10.书面表达英语书面表达：介绍中国的中秋节。（100字左右）提示：1.中秋节在9、10月到来。我们吃各种不同的月饼，如：有坚果（nut）的、肉的、蛋黄（yolk）的等等。2.人们喜欢在露天（intheopenair）边吃月饼边赏月。3.在外工作的亲人赶回家和家人团聚，回顾过去，展望未来。1.改you为yourself.用心爱心专心12.在find后加it充当形式宾语，真正宾语是后面的动词不定式，构成“主谓宾补”这一单句形式。3.改the为a。4.√5.去掉will,条件状语从句中用一般现在时态表示将来。6.改give为giving，与前面taking并列。7.在even后加if，引导让步状语。8.改follow为follows。句子主语为eachofyou是单数。9.改day为days。10.改necessarily为necessary。该句为省去了主谓语itis的省略句，应用形容词作表语。书面表达：Mid-autumnDayisaChinesefestival.ItusuallycomesinSeptemberorOctober.Onthatdayweusuallyeatabigdinnerandmooncakes.（Itissaid“HouYi”missedhiswife,sohemademooncakes.Itlookslikethemoon.）Therearemanykindsofmooncakes.Theyaresmallroundcakeswithmeat,nuts,yolkorsomethingsweetinside.Eatingmooncakeshasbeenourcustom.Familiesstayoutsideintheopenaireatingmooncakes.Themostimportantthingislookingatthemoon,Intheevening,themoonlooksbrighterandrounder.Wecallthismoonthefullmoon.Onthatday,therewillbeabigfamilydinnerwhichmakesfamilymembersroundup.Peoplewhoworkfarawayfromtheirhomeswilltrytocomebackfortheunion.Atdinner,theycanlookbackonthepastandlookforwardtothe用心爱心专心2futuretogether.Afterdinner,peoplewilllightthelanternswhichareusuallyredandround.Childrenwillplaywiththeirowntoylanternshappily,sowecallthisdaygettingtogether.用心爱心专心3
