山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（2）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Iamaseniorhighschoolstudent．Tomyopinion,theclassroomisaplaceforstudentstogainknowledges．Soquietnessisbadlyneedforustolearnintheclassroom．Butrecentlysomestudentshasbroughttheirmobilephonestotheclassroomandweoftenhearoftheringofmobilephones．Someofthemevenwastedprecioustimeinclasstypeshortmessagesonthemobilephones．Tokeeptheclassroomquietlyandmakeusfocusmoreonourstudies,Isuggestthatmobilephonesbeusedintheclassroom．Atleast,theyshouldn’tbeusedwherewearehavingaclass．书面表达假如你是LiHua，担任学生会主席，你校刚在10月10日举行完首届校园外语节，请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英语稿，投递到英文报，The21stCentury。目的：为了丰富校园生活，提高同学们学习外语的积极性，校学生会特举办首届校园外语节。参赛形式：以班级为单位参加。用心爱心专心1活动内容：英文演讲，英文歌曲和英语短剧比赛。活动裁判：本校英语教师和外教。活动影响：增强了学生学习英语的兴趣等。参考词汇：ForeignLanguageFestival,EnglishSpeechContest,EnglishPlayletsCompetition注意：词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Editor，OnOct.10th,ourschoolheldthefirstForeignLanguageFestival….…Yourssincerely,LiHua改错1.…Tomyopinion…To→In2.…gainknowledges…knowledges→knowledge3.…isbadlyneedfor…need→needed4.…studentshasbrought…has→have5.…oftenhearofthering…去掉of6.…wastedprecioustime…wasted→waste7.…classtypeshort…type→typing8.…Tokeeptheclassroomquietly…quietly→quiet9.…mobilephonesbeused…phonesbe之间加not或shouldn’t用心爱心专心210.…wherewearehaving…where→wheneditor,OnOct.10th,ourschoolheldthefirstForeignLanguageFestival.ItaimedtomakecampuslifemorecolourfulaswellastoencourgestudentstostudyEnglish.Therewerethreeactivitiesduringthisfestival—EnglishSpeechContest,EnglishSongsandEnglishPlayletsCompetition.Eachcontestantfromalltheclassestookpartinthemactively.AndthejudgesconsistedofourEnglishteachersandforeignteachers.AsthechairmanoftheStudents’Union,Iwascompletelyinvolvedinthefestival.Inmyopinion,thisfestivalhasbeensuccessfullyorganized.Also,theatmosphereoflearningEnglishhasbeenwellconstructed.Moreover,ithaseffectivelyraisedourawarenessofcross-cultureandteamwork.Ihopesuchactivitieswillberegularlyheldthen.Yourssincerely,LiHu用心爱心专心3
