山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（61）短文改错此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。书面表达最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报社正在组织的一场讨论。讨论主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况并表明你自己的观点。60%的同学认为：40%的同学认为：用心爱心专心Thereareadvantageforstudentstoworkwhile1.____________studyingatschool.Oneofthemwasthat2._____________theycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,3.____________studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirown4._____________use.Earningtheirownmoneyallowthem5._____________tospendonanythingasiftheyplease.6._____________Theywouldhavetoasktheirparentsfor7._____________moneyorforpermissiontodothingsby8._____________themoney.Somestudentsmayalsotosave9._____________upforourcollegeorfutureuse.10._____________11．不应收门票2．公园是公众休闲的地方3．如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1．应收门票2．支付园林工人工资3．购买新花木注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。不计入词数。2.词数：120左右。Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua短文改错：Thereareadvantageforstudentstoworkwhile1.advantagesstudyingatschool.Oneofthemwasthat2.istheycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,3.√用心爱心专心2studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirown4.workuse.Earningtheirownmoneyallowthem5.allowstospendonanythingasiftheyplease.6.ifTheywould∧havetoasktheirparentsfor7.not或would→wouldn’tmoneyorforpermissiontodothingsby8.withthemoney.Somestudentsmayalsotosave9.toupforourcollegeorfutureuse.10.their书面表达Onepossibleversion:Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgateandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.Yourstruly,LiHua用心爱心专心3用心爱心专心4
