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第四部分写作（共两节,共35分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’tlivewithoutfriendshipjustaswecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinthefrontofus.Butrealfriendshipisnoteasytocomeby.Truefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstandeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Agoodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadviceswearepersuadingtogotherightway.Thereforemorefriendswehave,thebetterwecanimproveourselves.第假如你是一名英语老师，发现个别学生对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇英语短文来开导他们。写作要点：1．学英语的重要性。2．提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。要求：1．短文词数不少于100。2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。3．书写须清晰、工整。短文改错1.importance----important2.And----or3.Getting-----get4.Kind----kinds5.Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’timportantlivewithoutfriendshipjustaswecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesorusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesingetkindsthefrontofus.Butrealfriendshipisnoteasytocomeby.Truefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstandeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Asincereunderstandinggoodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadviceswearepersuadingtoadvicepersuadedgotherightway.ThereforeΛmorefriendswehave,thebetterwecanimproveourselves.the六．参考范文Asweknow,Englishhasalreadybecomeaninternationallanguage.Itiswidelyusedintheworld.However,afewstudentsfindithardtomasterit.Letmeshowhow.Firstly,makeupyourmindtolearnEnglishwellandnevergiveitup.Secondly,readthetextaloudinthemorningandtrytoremembertheimportantwords,phrasesandpatterns.Thirdly,finishallthehomeworkontime.Whenyoucomeacrosssomeproblems,gotoyourteacherorclassmates.Don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Followingmyadvice,Ihope,allofyoustudentscanmakegreatprogressoneday.