••NMET英语写作方法与技巧•---ScoringHighinNMET2011Writing••NMET2009书面表达•假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。•要点:•时间:下周六上午8:00至11:00•内容:采摘苹果•报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前•提示:带帽子、手套•欢迎踊跃参加NMET2009书面表达•OurDearResidents,•Inordertoenrichthelifeoftheresidents,thecommitteeofourcommunityhasarrangedaspecialactivityfornextweekend.•Weplantogotoafarmtopickapplesfrom8to11nextSaturdaymorning.Alltheresidentsinthe•communitycanjoin.Thoseinterestedintheactivityhavetosignupintheofficebefore5nextThursday.Inaddition,whileworkingthere,you’dbetterwearahatandglovestoprotectyourfacefrombeingexposedtothestrongsunlightandyourhands(frombeing)hurt.•Welcometotakeanactivepartintheactivity.•Wishyouawonderfultime!••Thecommitteeofthecommunity•OurDearResidents,•Inordertoenrichthelifeoftheresidents,ourcommunitycommitteehasarrangedaspecialactivityfornextweekend:we'llgotoafarmtopickapples.•TheactivitywillstartnextSaturdaymorningandwilllastthreehours.Thesigning-upintheofficewillbeendingbefore5nextThursday.Onemorething,ifyouhavedecidedtogowithus,•besuretotakehatsandgloveswith•you,astheyarenecessarytousewhileyouareworking.•Wereallyexpectalltheresidentsinthecommunitywilljoinusandhavefun.••Thecommitteeofthecommunity••(106words)Rewritingskills(写作有道)•1.重视5wh-questions:•whowhatwhenwherewhy2.Resupplywritingskill(追述技巧)3.Subjects(无生命的物作主语)4.名词修饰名词5.借助标点6.首尾相顾的写作方式7.避免冗言与拖泥带水•文的形态:三段式,首尾相顾;开门见山,直入主题;10句:•文章开头与结尾:•i.主题句→开始就点明全文主题:•Weallwanttogrowuphappily,andforthisgoalwemustdoseveralthings.•ii.时空法→以介绍某事件发生的时间和地点作为文章开头•文章结尾:•i.总结式→把全文提出的主要观点进行概括和总结:•ii.重复文章开头提出的主题,以达到前后呼应的效果:•iii.提出期望,或对未来展望:•Ifwedothosethingswell,wewillbeabletogrowuphappilyandhealthily.•Saturday,May6cloudy•LiMingandItookpartinawildernesssurvivalprogramyesterday,andithasbeenoneofthemostunforgettableexperiencessincehighschool.•Earlyinthemorning,wesetout.LiMingwascarryingacompassandatentinhisbackpack,andinminetherewasaflashlight,amap,aknife,afirst-aidkit,somematches,candles,food,andclothing.Onthewaytothecampsite,weclimbedahill,andthenweswamacrossariver,pushingthebackpacksonalargepieceofwoodwehadfoundbytheriver.Aswegotintoaforest,welostourway.•Luckily,wefoundtherightdirection•withthecompass.Bythetimewearrivedatthecampsite,ithadalreadybeendark.LiMingthenputupthetent,andImadeafireandstartedcooking.Thetwoofusspentthenightintheforest.•Welearnedtouseknowledgegainedinclassroomtrainingtosolveproblems.Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI'llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.•句的形态•E1(过渡性词语),E2(主语Subject的多样性),E3(修饰性词语),E4(精彩动词谓语部分),E5(补述或追述).•认识英语写作的基本特点•语序与信息:人们通过语言传递的信息是一个片断一个片断进行的。一个信息片断可以是一个句子,信息片断传递的信息可粗略地分为已知信息和新信息。一个信息片断最显著的部分有二:一是传递信息的起点,即处于句首的主位,另一个是新信息中最重要的部分,即信息中心。主位通常传递已知信息,信息中心位于句尾传递新信息。•从信息分布的情况说,英语句中最重要的信息一般出现在末端,称为末端中心;从结构分布上看,英语句中结构形式较长,较复杂的成分一般也向后推移,这种结...