高三英语书面表达教学案例分析 一、教学目的：通过写一篇提纲式作文，掌握基本的英语书面表达写作技巧，从而提高英语写作能力。二、教学内容：英语书面表达:最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息：给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1.不应收门票。2.公园是公众休闲的地方3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1.应收门票，但票价不要太高2.支付园林工人工资3.购买花木注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数：120 左右。3：参考词汇：门票—entrance feeI’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks ……. 三、课堂实录：Teacher :We are going to write an article today.(出示题目) Who can list the writing points?Student A:60 percent; shouldn’t receive tickets; public place; build gate ,wall; city image; 40 percent; should receive tickets; don’t be too expensive; pay workers; buy flowers and treesStudent B: had a discussion; the topic is : should the park receive ticket fee?Teacher:You should pay attention to the words and expressions that have been given: Whether an entrance fee should be charged?Teacher :Please write your essay.(20 minutes.)Teacher：写作提示：1.阅读提示。2.要点写全。 3.时态一致。 4.人称一致。(二十分钟后)Teacher: Let’s ask some of the students to read their essays.Student C read his article.Teacher write some of the typical mistakes on the blackboard：1.There are 60% students against the idea.→There are 60%students who are against the idea./60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.2. Park shouldn’t receive entrance fee.→a park should be free of charge./people needn’t buy tickets to enter the park.3.The money can pay garden workers.→The money can be used to pay the workers./They can use the money to pay gardeners...
