高三英语写作复习讲评课Assessment&PracticeofWritingByMoneyfromLongwanHighSchool一个周六的下午，“绿眼睛”环保组织成员李华和王平在河边开展环保行动时发现了一只小鸟受伤了，在地上无法飞行，于是他们展开了抢救行动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下：1、时间、地点、情景2、描述处理方法，包括救助，治疗3、简要谈谈你的感想。注意：字数100~120；参考词汇：绿眼睛环保组织：GreenEyes.ASSESSMENTstructureThearticleisdividedintoparts.contentAllthedetailsareincludedEverythingistothepoint(切题).LanguageTrytousesomelinking/transitionalwords(过渡词).Fewmistakes.Advancedvocabulary（高级词汇）.Somegoodsentencepatterns（句式）.HandwritingSavingTheWoundedBirdOneSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfromGreenEyes,arecarryingoutanenvironmentalprotectionactivityalongtheriversidewhentheyfoundabirdlyingontheground.________________,theypickeditupandfounditwounded.Innotime,theytookoutapieceofclothandthendressedthewoundedpart.Having__(perform)aseriesoffirstaid,theyheldthebirdintheirhands.______________,itcametolifeandstartedmoving.Whatappearancedontheirfaceswasthehappinessofsavingalife.____________________________________Obviously_____theirkindness____savedthewoundedbird,anditincreasesourawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionbecausetheearthishometoalltheanimalsaswellashumanbeings.没有犹豫WithouthesitationitisthatwhichwereIthink令他们高兴的是Totheirdelight很值得去做这事情it’sworthwileforthemtodosuchathing.performedHavingdugasquarepitfirst,theforeignersputasaplingintoit.Havingdone/doingsomething...,sb...种了几棵树，我感到非常的高兴。________________severaltrees,Ifeeldelighted.一到那里，大家就开始种树了。_________there,everybodybeganplantingtrees.看他们甜蜜的微笑，我能想象他们是多么的开心。___________________,Icanimaginehowdelightedtheyare.PracticeHavingplantedArrivingSeeingthesweetsmiles____surprisesmemostisthatsomanyenthusiasticpeopleparticipateinit.What我想说的是我们必须要保护环境。_______________isthatwemustprotecttheenvironment.WhatIwanttosay________________thattherearemanyforeignersplantingtrees.Tomysurprise,Itsurprisesmealotthat...holdthesaplingcarefullyand...puttheearthbacktothepit.Itishismotherwhohelpsthelittleboyplantatree.这个好的传统活动应该传承下去。____thegoodtraditonalactivity____shouldbepasseddownfromgenerationtogeneration.Itis/was…that/who…Itisthat在植树节这天种树是很有意义的。________________toplanttreesonTree-plantingDay.Itis+adj.(forsb)todo.Itis____________fortheboytoplanttreeswithhismother.Itismeaningfulunforgettable3月12日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下；1.时间、地点、情景；2.描述图片内容，包括师(外教)生、母子种树等3.简要谈谈你的感想（至少2点）。注意：字数100～120参考词汇：植树节Tree-plantingDay树苗sapling3月12日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下；1.时间、地点、情景；OnthemorningofMarch12th.NeartheHuichangRiverside._________anactivitytoprotecttheWenruiRiver.ItsthemeistoprotecttheWenruiRiver.TherewasanactivityheldneartheHuichangRiversidewiththepurposeofprotectingtheWenruiRiveronthemorningofMarch12th.Agoodmanypeoplewereplantingtreesthere.InordertoprotecttheWenRuiRiver,anactivitywhosepurposewastoplanttreeswascarriedoutbyplentyofstudentsaswellassomeforeignteachersalongtheHuichangRiveronTree-plantingDay.Therewas3月12日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇...
