书面表达亮点--提升第一反应词、句Stepone.Greetingandlead-in.(Comparetwopassagestodrawstudent’sattentiontotheimportanceogbeautifulexpressions.)（一）TheSpringFestivaliscoming.ItisverysignificantforChinese,whenallthefamilymembersgettogether.ItislikeChristmasinthewesterncountries.DoyouwanttofeeltheChineseculture?Iamsureyouwilllivehappilyhereandlearnalotoffunnythings.Besides,Icanalsoshowyouaroundsomeplaceshere.（二）TheSpringFestivalisjustaroundthecorner.ItisofgreatsignificanceforChinese,whenallthefamilymembersgettogether.ItislikeChristmasinthewesterncountries.WouldyouliketofeeltheChineseculture?Iamsureyouwilllivehappilyhereandlearnalotoffunnythings.What’smore,Icanalsoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthere.SteptwoGooverandmasterbeautifulandspecialexpressions.第一反应词代替词用use参观，拜访visit喜欢like帮忙help非常…very+adj.花…(时间，金钱）…spend…indoing(onsth.)be+adj.顺序first,second,third递进besides结果so并列（和）and一…就…assoonas总结inawordStepthreeExercises---beautifysentences:1)Thefollowingday,wevisitedherwithflowersandfruit.2.Ourschoolhasanewlook.3.Thepictureletmethinkofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.4.Thankyouforhelpingmetosolvetheproblems.5.PleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanyquestionsandI’dbeveryhappytohelp.6.Assoonaswearrivedthere,webegantoworkatonce.7.wecanachieveourgoalsonlyinthisway.(用only+介词词组位于句首-倒装)8.TheEnglishclubimprovedtheirspokenEnglishandbroughtthemmuchfun.(notonly..butalso)9.Loveandconcernhavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.（强调句）10..Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(定语从句)StepfourExercises—beautifypassage(passageone)Iamwritingtoaskifyouareabletohelpme.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,hopefullyagirlinhertwenties.Ihopeshelikestraveling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.AndIhopeshealsolikespetssowecanhavemanytopics.(Accordingtopassageone,trytofillintheseblanksbyusingbeautifulexpressions.)Iamwritingtoaskifyouareableto______________.Iwantto___________________agirlinhertwenties.Ihopeshe___________traveling,swimmingandplayingtabletennis.AndIhopeshelikespets______._________,wecanhavemanytopics.1Stepfive.Beautifyacomposition.（Nowpleasemakeuseofwhatwelearnttodaytoreplacewords/sentencesunderlinedtomakethepassagemorewonderful.）It'sagreatpleasureformetosharemyexperienceoflearningEnglishwithyou.IlikeEnglishandhopetobeaninterpreterinthefuture.Naturallyit'sveryimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.Weknowthatvocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage,justlikebricksinabuilding.Iusuallymemorizetwentynewwordsadayandusethemwheneverpossible.AndIoftenlistentoEnglishprogramsonTVandontheradioafterclass.Besides,I'velearnedalotfromtheInternetandothersources.Now,IwanttomakesomesuggestionsonEnglishteachingandlearninginourschool.First,weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousewhatwe'velearnedtohaveabettergraspofit.Second,Ihopeourteacherscanrecommendmoreinterestingbooksandmagazinesandgiveusmorefreetimetoreadthem.Third,weshouldhavemoreEnglishactivities,suchasEnglishcontestsandfestivals.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions.StepsixHomework:pleaserecitewhatwelearnttodayandtrytoputthemtousewhenpossible.2
