作文话题猜押写人类每个人都拥有自己的偶像，相信你的心中一定也有一颗“星”在闪烁。当我们遇到困难时，是这颗“星”指引我们冲出困境；当我们情绪低落时，是这颗“星”让我们心底绽放愉悦之花。请以“The Star in My Heart”为题写一篇短文。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80 词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1.介绍自己心目中的偶像，因此属于人物介绍类写作，最好是身边对自己影响较大的人物。（建议学生先回忆身边的人物，选定其中影响深刻的某一个人，确定好人物。）2.提示语中重点指出偶像对我们的积极影响，所以文章应说明他对我们的具体影响。【写作指导】心目中的偶像要点提示素材串联开头：引出人物每个人心目中都有偶像，引出我的偶像正文：介绍偶像以及她对我们的具体影响简单介绍偶像当我们遇到困难时（be in trouble）指引我们冲出困境(get out of trouble)当我们情绪低落时(be in a bad mood)让我们心底绽放愉悦之花(cheer up)结尾：抒发对此人的感激之情深深地打动我（moved deeply）在她的帮助下，我们英语成绩更好了（with the help of）非常感谢她帮了我们那么多（thank sb. for doing sth.）【高分范文】The Star in My HeartThere’s a star in everyone’s heart. The one in my heart is Mrs. Xu.Mrs. Xu is not well-known. She is an English teacher. She is always beautiful and graceful. In our daily life, she makes jokes with us just like our friends. When we are in trouble, she will try her best to help us get out of 1trouble. When we are in a bad mood, she will cheer us up.We are moved deeply by her. And with the help of her, we do better in our English now. We all thank her for helping us so much. As students, I think that we should learn from her.【写作模板】T...
