第二讲 如何写好文章正文正文是文章的核心段落,在写作时应遵循一定的顺序进行表达,才能让读者快速领会文章的表达内容,而不应是几个要点的简单堆砌
合理地组织段落会使文章大放异彩
1.组段应遵循的两个原则(1)统一性原则一段话只能有一个中心,每句话都只能围绕这个中心去阐述,不能随心所欲地添加一些与中心无关的句子
下面是一个缺乏统一性的段落:The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle
Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained
He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender
As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us
My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind
We bought the bicycle
[分析] 本段内容缺乏统一性,句与句之间关联性不大,貌似每句话表达一个中心意思
语意颠倒,而且最后一句与中心无关
正确内容如下:The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle
My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind
As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us
Pointing to a pol