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第二组：记 叙 文( 一 )Dear Lucy, I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival. It was the day for the elder people in our culture. elderly is theWe will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here. We will also spend some fun time together play games, which we hope will make they happy. We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon. in them playing there cakes If you are able to come to with us, please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua and ( 一 ) 本文是李华写给露西的邀请信，邀请她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。1. 在 Double Ninth Festival 前加 the 专有名词前须加定冠词 the ，特指重阳节 (the Double Ninth Festival) 。2. was→ is 客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。3. elder→ elderly 修饰名词 people 要用形容词， elderly 意为“上了年纪的”，符合文意；而elder 意为“年纪较大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相同的表达。4. cake→ cakes 因 cake 是可数名词，要与dumplings 并列，故要用复数。5. here→ there 根据上下文语境，此处应该是指“敬老院那儿”，而不是“这儿”。6. play→ playing 由固定结构 spend time (in) doing sth. 意为“花费时间做某事”可知。7. they→ them 作宾语要用宾格。8. on→ in 表“在下午 / 上午”用 in the afternoon/morning ；而表“在具体的某天上 / 下午”用介词 on 。9. 去掉 come 后的 to 此处 come 后并无宾语，故不需要介词 to 。10. so→ and 表顺承关系用并列连词 and 。around adj. 大约 reply n. 答复nursing home 敬老院 invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事( 二 ) I’ll spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenience, there’re still some problems, such as airs pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countrysid...